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Sketchbook Cover WIP by ~Darkchild413:iconDarkchild413:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > People

©2008 ~Darkchild413
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Submitted: April 20
File Size: 163 KB
Image Size: 100 KB
Resolution: 800×1222
Comments: 5
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A piece in progress for my sketchbook that I plan on having ready by the summer. I'm posting it for comments and crits so let me know what you think so far and what I may need to improve on.
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*Ankhu:iconAnkhu: Apr 23, 2008, 12:27:22 PM Mood: Optimism
I like the cover of this piece. It's very catchy with the pink background and the lady looking at you. The words are nicely designed and it's creative. You can get rid of the label on top of her head, becuase it is a distraction in my opinion. You can keep the words but the pink label just throws me off. I think the woman on the cover is the focus so getting rid of that would be the best way and for the words you can make them a pink color so your title can show. Other than that it looks greaT =).
Keith
*A-Blind-Vision:iconA-Blind-Vision: Apr 24, 2008, 4:53:35 PM
Oh WOW! i really like this. I do agree with Ankhu about the Pink Label. It looks a little out of place. But I am diggin' the chick! She's sexi! you already know that I LOOOOOOOVE tha AFRO! And I really like the faded pink in the background! ;)

I hope that helps! :confused: i'm not good at this.

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~Darkchild413:iconDarkchild413: Apr 26, 2008, 10:22:20 PM
Just followed your advice and it looks ten times better! Thanks homie!

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~Darkchild413:iconDarkchild413: Apr 26, 2008, 10:23:28 PM
Yeah, I took the label away and kept the ArtOfficial logo. It does look much better now. Thanks!

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*Ankhu:iconAnkhu: Apr 27, 2008, 1:03:25 PM
You're welcome homie =).
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